INTRANSIT
on Today, last year was on a Sunday by thepinkbunnyofdoom
8 Mar 2005, 7:30 PM
Easy day. These things usually drag on for months. Who the hell is Devilbuni?
Are you a Saggitarius?
Well, while poets are farmer-like in some respects, I was thinking about road tractors. The Idea was spawned from a dump trucks brakes, but that seems too wordy and interrupts what little rhythm I have here.
I would like to request a link to one of your P.I. Readings, as recommended to me by jeremi, horus8, and the 3 or 4 other names he has on this site. I hear they are the highest imaginable art, and would love to sample.
I'm sure thepinkbunnyofdoom appreciates the 10 you gave to each of his poems today, and the zeros needed to raise several of his to the top 20, helped of course by the 10's of Vince Dolamando, Nicely done! You realize, the poetntial is unlimited with multiple usernames and annonymous votes.
kinda depressing, don't you think.
if it's based on a true and personal experience,
i feel for ya. It was a decent piece of writing, but it
needs revision to make it to the top.
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in-cred-a-bull.
man, this was AM-AZ-ING. this is what poetry
is all about,
well done. i wish i could give you an 11.
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i reread your poem and i take back what i said. i was a little too harsh on you, and i'm sorry. It wasn't bad, but i think it needs revision. i'll give you a 6. a very good improvement since your earlier writings, may i add. -thanks
brought a tear to my eye and was very inspirational. well done, you're amazing. well written. a beautiful poem. I'll give you a 6, because i still think you need a little bit of work. you're on the right track!
good.
great job a beautiful poem and well written. well done.
Portently is from portent. Their tetherball and foursdquare games portend the kind of grownups they will become.
If you're calling it Poet, Earth Mover, then maybe use bulldozer in the last line. Or you could call it Poet, Farmer.
thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL
8 Mar 2005, 2:37 PM
Whats sad is its true, but funny none the less, welcome back.
<3 Jason
hello, pink bunny
DurtKL
replying on Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL
8 Mar 2005, 1:23 PM
no, why do you ask?
interesting
-lia
this appears to be a bunch of rambling nonsense - 3 -
-lia