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Scars (Free verse) by DevilTmptrss You hurt me on the inside
and left scars no one can see.
I tell myself that I don't care.
But if I were just so okay,
I wouldn't dare
to hurt myself the way I do.
Just like the way you used to do.
Up the ladder:
All Year Long
Down the ladder:
Teenage Graffiti
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Posted: July 30, 2002 9:52 PM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2002 9:52 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.820706 Overall Rank: 10897 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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30-Jul-02/10:12 PM
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Hey their little lady I have a whole glove box full of neosporin. Why don't we take my El camino down into that shadowy culdesac over yonder!
kinda depressing, don't you think.
if it's based on a true and personal experience, i feel for ya. It was a decent piece of writing, but it needs revision to make it to the top. ****************6******************** 164 view(s)
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