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Scars (Free verse) by DevilTmptrss

You hurt me on the inside and left scars no one can see. I tell myself that I don't care. But if I were just so okay, I wouldn't dare to hurt myself the way I do. Just like the way you used to do.

burgerking33 8-Mar-05/3:38 PM
kinda depressing, don't you think.
if it's based on a true and personal experience,
i feel for ya. It was a decent piece of writing, but it
needs revision to make it to the top.
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