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All Year Long (Lyric) by Sigh'ense...
You, and only you are my affliction as well as my New Year's resolution. Thoughts of us, accompany me all the days of the Earth's revolution. The ritual of loving consideration plaques my mentality in the dates' progression. And my heart's agenda isn't complete without the signature mark of your affection. You, and only you are my warmth in late winter season. Draped and covered in your "sensuality sweater". Like an umbrella in case of chilling rain, you are never forgotten for any reason. My shelter, even in the bleekest possibility of harsh weather. As refreshing to my soul as an autumn shower, Your touch cleanses my streets hour upon hour. Presidency of my sweet valentine, blossoms in the calendar of my mind. I find myself an April's fool, fascinated with your beautiful nature And anatomic agriculture of irresistible kind. Your smile shines bright and hot as the sun, blinding my conception. I want to dive into the deepness of those eyes and bathe in cooling ecstasy. Then celebrate the liberal independence of our destined astrological connection, With fireworks, pledging to you my romantic sovereignty. The type of woman that makes you crave for vacation leave, Fall to your knees in thanks giving, and hope to be elected. You are my treat on Halloween, and everyday in between My annual christmas present that could never be rejected. But respected, eternally for all of your waking eves.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10890
Posted: July 30, 2002 4:47 PM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2002 4:47 PM PDT
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[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.212.9 | 25-Aug-02/7:50 PM | Reply
This is the biggest loaf of Wisconsin cheese turd I have ever read in my life. I mean it is good to get in touch with the Robert Bly side of yourself, but this is flat out ridiculous. I mean come on, take a look at some of these lines. How could you actually write these without breaking down in shear laughter? "You are my treat on Halloween, and everyday in between," "With fireworks, pledging to you my romantic sovereignty," "Draped and covered in your "sensuality sweater"." Ugh. It was a painful read.
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