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A Relationship that didnt last

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

Once you think somethings good it ends up bad. Then your left wondering why it didn't last. Having a feeling that you've made a bad choice. Cause your feelings are all fucked up and now you feel all sad. You know what you got to do, But you really don't want to. So make your choice wisely, Cause you might not have another try. And keep your feelings inside if you don't you'll soon find out why.

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[0] poetandknowit 14-Aug-02/11:08 AM Reply
Oh brother. And such a clever use of profanity wasted.