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A Relationship that didnt last (Free verse) by lucky_cmc
Once you think somethings good it ends up bad. Then your left wondering why it didn't last. Having a feeling that you've made a bad choice. Cause your feelings are all fucked up and now you feel all sad. You know what you got to do, But you really don't want to. So make your choice wisely, Cause you might not have another try. And keep your feelings inside if you don't you'll soon find out why.

Up the ladder: to my best friend david
Down the ladder: All Year Long

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10895
Posted: July 25, 2002 6:37 PM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2002 6:37 PM PDT
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[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.10 | 14-Aug-02/11:08 AM | Reply
Oh brother. And such a clever use of profanity wasted.
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