poetandknowit25 Aug 2002

This is the biggest loaf of Wisconsin cheese turd I have ever read in my life. I mean it is good to get in touch with the Robert Bly side of yourself, but this is flat out ridiculous. I mean come on, take a look at some of these lines. How could you actually write these without breaking down in shear laughter? "You are my treat on Halloween, and everyday in between," "With fireworks, pledging to you my romantic sovereignty," "Draped and covered in your "sensuality sweater"." Ugh. It was a painful read.