Nice to see you again, lady.

I think its time for some heroin...

were ar my votes!!!

I just dont buy it joe?

Brilliant! Truly cutting-edge SOC. Firstly, a sensual vision, but then, an ironic forray into post-modern awareness; I like it.

Well Ed, I think you've got some of us piqued. I think this needs more. But that's me.

Sometimes, a firecracker resonates like a bomb.

love the last stanza there are some weak parts such as: "So bland a feeling, Not being able to say… What you feel and think, Needing savior from an ego that consumes." but improve the flow and the poem will improve alot. good job.

blah blah blah-continue-blah blah blah-please-blah blah blah blah blah. 5. The rest upon delivery.

Too smart to be a pimple, why? I like the way this rolls but it sounds just abit rap-ish. Should I turn the potentiometer below 33 1/3?

The main part that bothered me was "a single pray prayed". I think maybe it should be "a single prayer, prayed"?

Does the figure wear a tall hat? Is it cloaked in a cloak? Is it arm-ed with prawnes? Scary indeed.

Of the two, this ones funnier. If they ever see a book, they should be on the same page or back to back.

Gangs of New York, all gussied up. Listen and fix the hiccups.

Just thought I'd try my hand at a country song (I do live in Tennessee, after all).

ing weakens the verbiage. i want more immediancy from you

show me. dont tell me

i like the premise, but the execution needs work.

Someone put them in the bin.

Tug off again probably.