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Tomorrow's Dance (Free verse) by RevHydra
Far Beyond Tomorrow's Dance, we sing together a ballad of life, but through the eyes of a Devil and all that sees. May one or two be posted amoungst the ranks of the Gods. For nothing below that is left for dessamtion unto the later's sold slavers and masters...let it rest....... .let it rest..............

Up the ladder: escape
Down the ladder: Keep it... or let it go

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11244
Posted: June 1, 2004 10:53 PM PDT; Last modified: June 1, 2004 10:53 PM PDT
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Comments:
[1] god'swife @ 209.178.142.212 | 2-Jun-04/1:13 PM | Reply
What the fu...?
[n/a] ggawrysi @ 67.81.241.50 | 3-Jun-04/11:34 PM | Reply
reading it several times helps... believe me, i agreed with god'swife at first, but it starts to resemble something
[n/a] RevHydra @ 172.143.13.97 | 5-Jun-04/10:04 PM | Reply
I think its time for some heroin...
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