titan69
on some deleted poem
5 Jun 2004, 12:30 AM
yer take a long sleep. a very long sleep
Very good lots of feeling9/10
i would have to give it a 10, good poem, keep up the good work
its got to be no.1
this is so good you have a good way with words
and dont wright a load of crap about your self like so
on this site.10/10
What is the correct name for a flock of turds? I believe it is an "inconvenience".
Our soldiers do need many prayers Bratsy.A great poem. You might consider his greatest fear to have his body left in foreign soil instead of being brought home.
I like the style and the idea.
different from what i read most...cool.
You chose not to capitalize (howl). Interesting.
I think I need some Poundage myself.
are you kidding?
I'd eat a double bacon cheeseburger with a large order of curly fries and a large vanilla shake.
Are you the Down's syndrome love child of Rod McKuen, or some kind of retarded stalker? This poem is so bad it's frightening.
Girls Gone Wild, San Felipe 2001.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH
When my brother-in-law gets bored at parties, he climbs into trees and urinates on the partygoers below. Do other people do this?
re: "the swan and wolf mate for life," - Jesus! Not with each other, I hope?!??!!?!
9.
honestly I think he actually sounds most like the rat-faced sidekick's pet rat Scabbers.
i liked it.. cuz i am into these mystical creatures of the nights as well... good job...