Dan garcia-Black
on Shamefaced by Doug
17 Jun 2004, 7:59 PM
I like the idea and the follow through. I trip over some of the images in line five. I think you mean "You're sure to know Him" right? -8-
Ever read "Sarum" by Edward Rutherfurd? Those [eventual] Masons "Rocked" the free World to come. Satan and Pagan ruled for centuries. Embrace an Icon??? Stonehenge is offlimits now.
Wuz "you" really right..??..even if you'd never been to Calif?
No sand in your shorts? I was enthralled by the West Coast promenade many years ago, but, I had no right to stay. Good vote to you.
First two comments from bad limerick
I don't get how 0 relates to the poem. 0.o;
But i like it.
That is better.
You wascally wabbit.
A hater now
Yes Yes, cudos. Very well done
Mtv, and then perhaps, a tidy bowl commercial.
Hippies and cantalope
my frown is upside down.
Don't forget your listerine.
So much said, so few words word.
Next time you choose an incredible place not to go, try and make it little more map dot as it were. Way more could be said about California. I'll leave it at that.
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Ow! Ow! Do the Illuminati Next!!! Or C.E.R.N., Inventing the Internet. At least get into the Wonderous decussion of Peak Oil?! Anti-matter!?! Bio-Organics perhaps? Or anything Else Mentioned In "ANGELS AND DEMONS" by Dan Brown.
brilliant, brilliant stuff here.
A 10 of shame, Zodiac?