some deleted user
on Do You Love Me Too by DustyStar
17 Jun 2004, 11:15 AM
Help me I'm trapped in this comments box.
My organ never settles down.
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things, average, ain't (ai not), me, happiness, here's, hate's, don't, sometimes, me
p.s. no one will ever love you
omg thats a good poem good job girl
its kinda good but i like it
No one should ever raise their voice above a respectable, appreciable volume in all public spaces.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
17 Jun 2004, 11:28 AM
You have a dewy half-baked filling.
And dark angel is another who needs to get a life!!
Fairly funny,semi-clever.
Please pay no mind to zoddie's comment, as it is coming
from an artless underwit.I gave you a 7.
Rump
Hilarious
you need a new title though, bad.
Last line had me perplexed.
thats a good one jess love ya Shay
this is a good poem
This poem is entirely lacking in art.
This reminds me of my poem "Blinking", which is posted at http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?i
I can't imagine why you'd want to say "I can only drive slowly, first gear on the gradients,
Slow progress only is possible."
i really like it awesome