I was never fond of haikus, but this is okay considering I've never read a haiku all the way through. (which should prove how much I dislike them)

go

fuck

yourself

you

Cambodian

pickle

presser

I decided to re-post this poem since it was being accused of self-voting. So here we go again.

What?

You get better and better every time i come back please keep writting you poems for poemranker. Cheers then, see ya, bye

Wow, how late is this? I really liked your style from the most recent from you "Same Old Story" so I decided to look more into your stuff. Very nice. Very very nice.

It's the strangest thing, I can't help but read your stuff. It's not the best thing I've ever read, far from it, but I keep reading it. So bonus points there.

"But I cannot escape For I am stuck within myself" This logic falls prey to the fallacies of Cartesian Materialism. There is no "you" that is within "yourself."

Ouch!

I do ask that if you vote for this poem, that you leave some commentary. Not cowardly 2's, even if the poem deserves it.

Liverpool 3-0 West Brom More Premiership photos Rafael Benitez's view Gary Megson's view Liverpool steadied their early nerves with a comfortable win that left West Brom awaiting their first league win. Steven Gerrard rounded off a slick move to open the scoring and a cool-headed Steve Finnan effort put Liverpool comfortably ahead at the break. West Brom became more involved after the break but when Luis Garcia hammered home a third, following up his own blocked shot, the points were safe. Robert Earnshaw came on for his West Brom debut but made little impact. West Brom's Martin Albrechtsen had already nearly put through his own net before Gerrard rewarded Liverpool's early pressure with the first goal. He combined with Garcia and Finnan to charge through on goal and kept his balance to shoot home from close range. That lead was nearly extended when Neil Clement's attempted clearance was cleared off his own line, and from the resulting corner Sami Hyypia went close with a header. Clement's off-target header from a Jason Koumas corner was West Brom's first meaningful effort on goal before Garcia wasted a glorious chance to double Liverpool's lead when his free header was way off target. Finnan claimed his first league goal for Liverpool to make it 2-0 when he trapped Jon Arne Riise's cross-field ball superbly and slotted home from a tight angle. Clement again went close for Albion in the dying seconds of the half but Djibril Cisse nearly made it 3-0 as Liverpool went in comfortably ahead at the break. Earnshaw came on just after half time as the visitors began to get more involved in the game, before Garcia wrapped up the points when he followed up his own blocked shot to thump home. Koumas soon tested Jerzy Dudek with a low long-range effort but with Liverpool showing no likelihood of letting their lead slip, the game was over as a serious contest. Near the end, substitute Milan Baros had strong penalty appeals waved away when West Brom captain Darren Purse brought him down on the edge of the box. And keeper Russell Hoult needed to be at his best to block Cisse's late effort as Liverpool eased to victory.

This would make a nice song actually

I'm with you on the pain, the cold. Why drive-way, not driveway? If it's a rewrite, why "throat.When?"

If you're going to insist on this new orderliness in your poems, I'm going to wonder just how much of a rebel you really are anymore. Rhyming and meter? But there's a gap here being bridged by young lioness poems, and I like the way it flows.