poemranker ::Eurydice by amb12203

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Free verse № 3777

Eurydice

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

Singing a tune To the ghostly doom He thinks that he can save me. I follow his light Knowing full well that night Could never quite release me. He pads up the stairs With his tune and the air growing crisper as I follow. His words like a knife Singing softly of life That we'll share in the bright tomorrow. And I want to believe, But instead I just grieve And my throat fills up with sorrow. Then he turns back to me For a moment to see The final result of his song. I don't know if he heard My last line of words I love you, let go, I am gone.

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[7] Blue Magpie 11-Sep-04/10:22 PM Reply
This would make a nice song actually