Oooh, very interesting. Nice work.

Well, although I'm kind of stepping in out of nowhere, I don't think punctuation is for the artless, but it shouldn't be a defining trait in a good writer either. If someone has enough passion that he/she starts writing and doesn't put a period or comma where it should be, then oh well. The Literary Hand of God won't squash us just for that. Good poem.

I think this poem would be better with a scene. A metaphor to express this 'choice'.

I disagree with the concensus here. I actually like this. It's a 6 for me.

Hahaha, well burn my buscuits. This poem actually won something. I honestly didn't like this poem too much and am very suprised that it's doing as well as it is. But anyways, if my crappy poem can win something, then just think of the stuff you real writers can win.

I like how you took a serious topic and kind of made it into this elementary rhyming thing (and I'm not one to talk). It'll be a 5 for me.

Before anyone starts recommending Teen hotline numbers, I'd like to say for the record that this poem is NOT about me.

This might be the stupidity talking, but this seemed like one word gathering. I could see the words, but nothing was registering. But! Since I'm sure that it's my fault I don't understand it, I'll put a 6 in, because surely it must mean something.

"A rebel just because". I liked that alot. Good poem, last line was eh, but overall, I liked it much.

Very good poem. I've always said that I wasn't a big fan of lengthy poems, or poems that appeared to be long, because they bore me. But this made me keep reading. Instant 9.

This actually brought a picture to mind. 8.

Hm.

Beautifully done! You are a master poet.

Well, I can't complain. 7 for me.

Interesting.

Baaaaaad lintyweenis.. No self voting. Tsktsk

Very good revision. :) -10-

? You can self-vote? <is lost. Haha, if I knew that, I would have dumped my Funny Little World one with a 5. But honestly, I had no idea that there was self-voting. It might have been the sibs in the house since they have the password to this account. (my dad's idea, not mine). Although I don't know how they could do it and I didn't even know it existed. I'll look into it and make a small revision so that all the votes will be cleared if it turns out that they have been doing that though. I may be a mediocre writer, but I am an honest person.

Well, I looked into the voting history and found nothing. I asked my sibs. and got nothing from them, and why would they lie if they did? *shrugs* I couldn't find any proof that there was self-voting so I'm at loss on what to do here.

Ooh. This goes on the favorite tab. Nice.