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Stephen Robins on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 16 Nov 2004, 8:57 AM
BIG FAT WOW.
Bobjim on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 16 Nov 2004, 9:11 AM
Psh
fevriere on some deleted poem 16 Nov 2004, 9:43 AM
It truly does make one wonder. So much poemranker poetry about poo. Little about wee. There's something I haven't covered yet.
[mojo] on For Ike by INTRANSIT 16 Nov 2004, 9:46 AM
Excellent. I was needing a little bit of rhyme and along it came... bang on time. V nice.
fevriere on Trapped in a horseshoe by INTRANSIT 16 Nov 2004, 9:51 AM
I like the line breaks, they build tension, make the words seem like worth living too. Just thinking though, is "nighttime sun" just there to rhyme with "captive one"?, because I don't know if it belongs, otherwise.
richa on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 16 Nov 2004, 11:50 AM
The T-word irritates me, I find the idea of poets (or anyone) saying what truth is a bit pretentious. The F-word in the penultimate line, the same. As for 'converse' maybe use reciprocal or something like that.
RGSsparky on Feminist? by RGSsparky 16 Nov 2004, 12:57 PM
I met the most annoying American feminist, hence the above...
RGSsparky on Last dance at the lake by Caducus 16 Nov 2004, 1:17 PM
Lovely
RGSsparky on Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8 16 Nov 2004, 1:19 PM
your point?
RGSsparky on madness by mashasha 16 Nov 2004, 1:48 PM
very odd, very difernt, very weird, but still, i always give a 10
edpeterson on Feminist? by RGSsparky 16 Nov 2004, 2:02 PM
FUcking hilarious
fevriere on Feminist? by RGSsparky 16 Nov 2004, 2:16 PM
Undelightful and horrible grammar.
fevriere on madness by mashasha 16 Nov 2004, 2:17 PM
"u" is not a word.
Stephen Robins on It Still Hurts by poetryman 17 Nov 2004, 5:28 AM
That last paragraph was needed as it helped me void my lunch over my desk - up to that poit I thought I might hold it in. Top Work Bobby!
leonxic on why you change?.. by shadowanime2 17 Nov 2004, 1:14 AM
Incomprehensible. I hope this is a joke. I hate it.
Bobjim on Feminist? by RGSsparky 17 Nov 2004, 3:27 AM
Love it. But really, it's too good. You'll never get your orange wings like this.
blacksoul on GODDESS by jroday 17 Nov 2004, 7:05 AM
This is a lovely poem man
Bobjim on The Supreme Mind by Bobjim 17 Nov 2004, 8:56 AM
Bobjim's making a comeback. Oh yeah.
richa on Mice by MacFrantic 17 Nov 2004, 3:18 PM
Not sure this is a great insight into mice but it sounds ok. Apart from 'not but strife' which sounds ridiculous.
richa on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 17 Nov 2004, 3:23 PM
I don't know if you meant this, but it reads as though there is no object of your 'love' but rather you are just transforming the phrase I love you.