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Last dance at the lake (Free verse) by Caducus
Take me back to the lake she said.
Still go there when I am gone.
Scatter me where we kissed by the lake bed
And watch me rise with the sun.
Play Nat King Cole when you feel weak,
and think back to when we met
when we danced cheek to cheek.
Donât forget to walk the dogs,
and winters coming so cut some logs.
Donât upset the neighbors
When they come round for favors
Keep the house clean
When the children come
Your clothes are in the machine
And your shirts are all done
I hung them over the ottoman.
Lie down next to me she said
And sing to me our song
Oh my love I can see the lake bed
Donât cry my love be strong.
Today I drove to the lake
Sat down where we kissed just before dawn break.
I listened to Nat King Cole
felt her with me in body and soul,
and as the swanâs took flight
I watched her rise into sunlight,
forgetting how she fell
as she danced on in my memories.
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Posted: November 16, 2004 9:27 AM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2004 3:51 AM PST
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