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GODDESS (Free verse) by jroday
SWEET AND LOVELY SHE PASSES MY EYES. A BEAUTIFUL GODDESS TOOK ME BY SURPRISE. HER EYES LIKE FIRE, HER LIPS MY DESIRE. OH WHAT A SENSUAL SERENITY, IN A MORNING CALL WITH THE SOFTNESS OF A WHISPERING BREEZE, BLUE VISTAS OF FRAGRANT LANDSCAPES. ON THE VERANDAH OF AROUSAL, WARMING OUR TOUCHES TO A SURRENDERING AND LOVING MOOD. RED ROSES AGAINST HER BEAUTIFUL COMPLEXTION, SMOOTH VOLUPTUOUSNESS, AND QUIET PASSIONS,SPREADING HERSELF LIKE OIL OVER THE TROUBLED SEA OF THOUGHT, AND KEEPING THE MIND SMOOTH AND EQUABLE IN THE ROUGHEST WEATHER. A BEAUTIFUL GODDESS INDEED! ONE OF THE MOST PRECIOUS GIFTS OF HEAVEN, AN INEXHAUSTIBLE GOOD NATURED PERSON ONE WHO CAN GROW CONFIDENTLY IN THE DIRECTION OF YOUR DREAMS. HER IMAGINATION IS THE BEGINNING OF CREATION, SHE IMAGINES WHAT YOU DESIRE, SHE WILLS WHAT YOU IMAGINE, AND AT LAST YOU CAN CREATE WHAT YOU WILL.

Up the ladder: Bad-Ass Mudder-Fugger
Down the ladder: A Letter Home

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8463
Posted: October 21, 2004 8:55 AM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2004 8:55 AM PDT
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[n/a] jroday @ 204.215.33.37 | 21-Oct-04/2:38 PM | Reply
I'm sorry Mrs dovina for deleteing your comments. i should have not been on my grandads computer anyway.
you know he is in the hospital
[8] Dovina @ 24.52.156.155 > jroday | 21-Oct-04/2:51 PM | Reply
You said something similar after you deleted my comment on your poem a couple of weeks ago. I guess that's enough commenting.
[10] blacksoul @ 204.215.33.158 | 17-Nov-04/7:05 AM | Reply
This is a lovely poem man
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