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Art serves a Purpose (Free verse) by i_am_the_popsicle
Art serves a purpose that is not quite it's own, and when spring comes, everybody's smiling. Have you ever wondered why it's always a long and lonely winter, or what makes a shorter day seem that much longer? We all have. But what really matters is that when the mittens are back in closet, and the dandelions are starting to bloom you enjoy it. Because beauty is fleeting and likes to head south for the winter.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8419
Posted: August 24, 2005 10:27 AM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2005 10:27 AM PDT
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[7] woodstock20000 @ 209.40.29.18 | 24-Aug-05/10:55 AM | Reply
Lovely.
[5] Dovina @ 12.72.4.44 | 24-Aug-05/2:38 PM | Reply
Leave out the parts that tell us what we think - "We all have." "you enjoy it." Your idea is good, but look at the grammar, and be a little slyer (is that a word?) in how you say it.

[7] Bethy @ 24.222.32.240 | 24-Aug-05/3:42 PM | Reply
nice...:) Bethy
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