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To my Valentine (Free verse) by Lola
I've begun counting my blessings And I realize that the list goes on and on coz baby, there are so many reasons believe me, so many reasons, why I love you and can't help myself. There's that smile that warms my heart and the way you make me smile even when my day is depressing. I love the way you turn me on and make me want you more I love the way you pamper me and call me names I love to hear. You're kind and gentle, wild and good, hilarious and funny, and serious too, we go crazy together and miss each other and spend hours of sharing and loving. You're all that I want in a man and I love the way you make me feel so beautiful within. And yes my love, I see our dreams come true in you. I love you my Valentine.

Up the ladder: The Finding
Down the ladder: Dream Grower

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8453
Posted: February 14, 2007 6:45 AM PST; Last modified: February 14, 2007 6:45 AM PST
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Comments:
[10] A_Dark_Calm @ 71.68.46.177 | 14-Feb-07/6:49 AM | Reply
Ditto...
[n/a] Lola @ 61.17.22.217 > A_Dark_Calm | 14-Feb-07/6:50 AM | Reply
:-) XXX xx
[5] Dovina @ 208.127.90.123 | 14-Feb-07/9:17 AM | Reply
Very touching, you two, but hardly of general interest. Enjoy your love.
[4] nentwined @ 76.167.62.172 > Dovina | 15-Feb-07/6:32 PM | Reply
Ditto. More anti-interest.

Definite pimple.

Maybe people should be able to nominate poems for a pimple, instead of just being able to pick that category...
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