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It Still Hurts (Free verse) by poetryman
the worst pain I ever felt
wasn't being abandoned by my mother
or the war in vietnam
that claimed my only brother
it wasn't the abuse
from an alcoholic dad
nor the step mother from hell
whom every man had
it wasn't the shattered knee
that ended my athletic dreams
nor the old and tattered clothes
bursting at the seams
the worst pain I ever felt
was the day that you died
the first I can remember
that I really, really cried
Bob Shank-2004
Dedicated to Aunt Florence, the love of my life. A woman who had been
crippled from polio as a child and yet raised me til I was seven. Even
after that, she was always there, nuturing and loving. A woman who never
uttered a complaint. Humility was her forte. You may rest in peace, but
you'll always rest within my heart......Bobby
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Posted: November 11, 2004 6:41 AM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2004 6:41 AM PST
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