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a goblet of divine wine brings me dreams (Free verse) by Prince of Void
Unconsciously dreaming into the another dream And being sized by the light at the end of void When a sudden vision set me free From the prison of desire And took me to the deepest peace To the furthest reach of my soul Left something inside me That was an opening world A silent enigma, opening mind Within the haunting love of divinity Since I’ve been chosen Since I’ve entered into the mystical world Since I’ve taken a goblet of divine wine Since I’ve been lost and waken up With unfolded secrets of all time

Up the ladder: Sleep It All Away
Down the ladder: Andrew part II

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9620
Posted: September 12, 2004 1:09 PM PDT; Last modified: September 12, 2004 1:09 PM PDT
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[9] LintyWeenis @ 205.188.117.13 | 12-Sep-04/1:13 PM | Reply
sized or seized?
Either way. Good job.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.146 > LintyWeenis | 12-Sep-04/1:20 PM | Reply
Thank you a lot ..yeah u are right that is "seized"?
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.146 > LintyWeenis | 12-Sep-04/1:23 PM | Reply
Thank you a lot ...yeah You are right that's "seized".
[8] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 12-Sep-04/3:11 PM | Reply
Yea, I've felt like that, the haunting love of divinity, into the mystical world. Why is that? Good poem.
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