Poemranker [Poem: a goblet of divine wine brings me dreams] [by Prince of Void] Thu Nov 21 08:41:12 PST 2024

a goblet of divine wine brings me dreams (Free verse) by Prince of Void

Unconsciously dreaming into the another dream And being sized by the light at the end of void When a sudden vision set me free From the prison of desire And took me to the deepest peace To the furthest reach of my soul Left something inside me That was an opening world A silent enigma, opening mind Within the haunting love of divinity Since Iâve been chosen Since Iâve entered into the mystical world Since Iâve taken a goblet of divine wine Since Iâve been lost and waken up With unfolded secrets of all time

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9586

Posted: September 12, 2004 1:09 PM PDT; Last modified: September 12, 2004 1:09 PM PDT
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[9] LintyWeenis @ 205.188.117.13 | 12-Sep-04/1:13 PM | Reply

sized or seized?
Either way. Good job.

[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.146 > LintyWeenis | 12-Sep-04/1:20 PM | Reply

Thank you a lot ..yeah u are right that is "seized"?

[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.146 > LintyWeenis | 12-Sep-04/1:23 PM | Reply

Thank you a lot ...yeah You are right that's "seized".

[8] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 12-Sep-04/3:11 PM | Reply

Yea, I've felt like that, the haunting love of divinity, into the mystical world. Why is that? Good poem.

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