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why you change?.. (Lyric) by shadowanime2
6 grader,lawrence school in class we all laughe chat we were young i saw you carefree with no needs now lawrence high after a year withough seeing you..so much diffrent of your face you have change a young girl who looks look innocen baby face now look at you.. mary shows up with coddom smiles with big grin outside me seeing you like that but i know.. inside you ruin your life i could see you upset but there nothing to me to do "plese god help her" praying before go to bed picture that ---how come you change?..-------

Up the ladder: This rage
Down the ladder: Pulse of life

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.8102965
Overall Rank: 10960
Posted: November 16, 2004 6:15 PM PST; Last modified: November 16, 2004 6:15 PM PST
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Comments:
[2] leonxic @ 204.218.244.11 | 17-Nov-04/1:14 AM | Reply
Incomprehensible. I
hope
this is
a joke.
I hate
it.
[n/a] Bobjim @ 143.167.79.145 > leonxic | 17-Nov-04/3:24 AM | Reply
I
agree. Somebody
should
be shot for
this travesty.
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