jessicazee
on Dino's by RGSsparky
14 Nov 2004, 7:29 PM
Wanted:
Jingle writer for pizza place. Some experience preferred; will train. Must have no body hair. No freaks. 555-dino
hogwash!
Philospphy is worse!
Weird enough to merit a 5.
great poem, keep up the good work, i could tell it came from the heart, -10-
"You conquered my flaw of being shy." That's agreat line because it happened to me once, and that's what makes a line great, of course. Many people are out hunting for that person to collect the bounty.
This is pretty well said. I could poke holes in some of it, but it's still well said.
Silliness!
4 out of 5 quantum physisists agree; Colgate Whitening with Scope severely improves your chances of a
sheep-related injury.
who needs punctuation when the place has a face?
Maybe some nu-punk song lyrics.
Wahey!!!
I haven't seen a poemwanker award since mine got taken away. Congratulations!
Maybe I should get mine back to boost the numbers...
I sense a lot of rage coming out in this poem. Perhaps you should consider some of my never-fail calming techniques.
For you, I would suggest finding the biggest, cheapest, ugliest mobile phone around, buying 10 of them, and destroying them in interesting ways.
Alternatively, send this poem to every mobile phone company's customer services e-mail address.
Simply because I like the philosophy behind this, 7.
But because I like the poem itself, you actually get a 10.
Maybe I'm reading this badly, but I get very little sense of depth.
My God, what's happening, a completely serious thought on a poem from me!?! The end of the world is nigh!
I WOULD REWORD THAT LAST SENTENCE AS YOU ASS KISSING GAY LOOKING WANNABE GANGSTAH FROM WEST HOLLYWOOD. BUT THAT IS JUST ME.
BTW, I AM ENJOYING MARILYN MANSON SINGING DEPECHE MODE.
ABOUT FUCKING TIME.
The title tells us too much. The all-caps speak too loudly, adding to the preachiness.
Some event escapes me, an off-t-war parting maybe. Soem good lines, but vague.
Oh God! Math poems!
This will make the approximately the millionth time the following message has been posted on poemranker.
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1) The converse of "I love you" is not "You love me". Its converse is nothing, or at best "If something is you, then I love that thing," since converses are mainly useful for altering if/then expressions.
2) None of the three main transformations (converse, inverse, contrapositive) can transform "I love you" into "you love me".