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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award: WHAT YOU GIVE AWAY IS WHAT YOU TAKE TO HEAVEN (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~wfor appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising. Read with caution! THOUGH YOU SEE HIM THERE
PLEASE DON'T TELL A SOUL.
THERE WAS A MAN ON VINE
HE HAD A LOOK IN HIS EYE AS THOUGH HE KNEW SOMETHING
OLD.
I BOUGHT HIM A COFFEE AND HE SAID THANK YOU.
I TOLD HIM I LIVE IN HANCOCK PARK, HE SAID....
DO YOU HAVE MORE COFFEE?
I SAID...... YES
SPEAK TO ME OF SUMMER
Up the ladder:
Helpless
Down the ladder:
Rushed into the blur
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Posted: November 15, 2004 10:01 PM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2004 10:01 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8410625 Overall Rank: 10723 Comments:
The title tells us too much. The all-caps speak too loudly, adding to the preachiness.
Expert insight into the preachiness.
I thought you said you wanted to poke holes in her? Isn't that an expression of endearment?
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I haven't seen a poemwanker award since mine got taken away. Congratulations!
Maybe I should get mine back to boost the numbers...