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my friend beth we wear (Free verse) by jessicazee the same size pants about the scar
I swear you told me I heard
about the carnival your boyfriend
is married not that much
fatter tomorrow Iâll pay you
back donât matter again
donât forget what I said donât
tell anyone that light turn it off
okay that song was fucking
great I just forgot I gave
you a ride write your number
on this napkin I will remember
the time what time my shoe is
under that over thanks
my foot is asleep tomorrow
call me weâll figure it out
I saw I heard a noise
a car where is a match
Up the ladder:
Black Clouds
Down the ladder:
Who Are We
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Posted: September 21, 2005 9:03 PM PDT; Last modified: September 21, 2005 9:03 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8410625 Overall Rank: 10674 Comments:
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Dovina @ 24.59.205.78
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22-Sep-05/2:21 PM
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In a flow of thought ramble like this, I still think punctuation is good. Or at least put each thought on a separate line.
I spank this hurricane a monkey throwing but Snickers at me.
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