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moving away (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
moving away away from this place look at its face the worlds disgrace why did i leave why did i go im confused too abused

Up the ladder: Eagledale Drive
Down the ladder: HALF

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5590
Posted: November 14, 2004 10:18 AM PST; Last modified: November 14, 2004 10:18 AM PST
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[5] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 14-Nov-04/12:51 PM | Reply
What good is the last line, except to rhyme?
[n/a] leonxic @ 80.205.204.85 | 14-Nov-04/1:49 PM | Reply
4 out of 5 quantum physisists agree; Colgate Whitening with Scope severely improves your chances of a
sheep-related injury.
[6] jessicazee @ 205.188.116.135 | 14-Nov-04/7:26 PM | Reply
who needs punctuation when the place has a face?
Maybe some nu-punk song lyrics.
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