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moving away (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1 moving away
away from this place
look at its face
the worlds disgrace
why did i leave
why did i go
im confused
too abused
Up the ladder:
It's a Mammal, Stupid!
Down the ladder:
Take heart, you are closer than you know
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Posted: November 14, 2004 10:18 AM PST; Last modified: November 14, 2004 10:18 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.134471 Overall Rank: 5595 Comments:
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Dovina @ 69.175.6.101
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14-Nov-04/12:51 PM
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What good is the last line, except to rhyme?
4 out of 5 quantum physisists agree; Colgate Whitening with Scope severely improves your chances of a
sheep-related injury.
who needs punctuation when the place has a face?
Maybe some nu-punk song lyrics. 277 view(s)
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