poemranker ::Stuck by QuirkyWonder

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Stuck

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Jun 2004 · 1 comment

White washed walls of freedom Surrounding on all four sides A room full of doors Yet all of them locked Wrapped up in the sheets Of ghosts and secret pasts A mountain view But only 'cause you painted it there Stars all around to wish upon Somehow none of them seem to come true Drowning in your fears Holding on too tight.

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