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Stuck (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder
White washed walls of freedom Surrounding on all four sides A room full of doors Yet all of them locked Wrapped up in the sheets Of ghosts and secret pasts A mountain view But only 'cause you painted it there Stars all around to wish upon Somehow none of them seem to come true Drowning in your fears Holding on too tight.

Up the ladder: Where Did You Go?
Down the ladder: LIFELINE

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5578
Posted: June 3, 2004 11:12 PM PDT; Last modified: June 3, 2004 11:12 PM PDT
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