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A friend told me (Free verse) by RION12 "Merry Christmas,Merry Christmas!"
That is all I ever hear.
I think how can Christmas be so merry if there is so much pain.
How can people be so happy?
I told my friend what I thought.
This is what they told me back:
"The world is bad.
Your life is bad.
Everything is bad.
No matter how bad or how hard life is the smallest happy thing makes
everything great."
Up the ladder:
The lost perfume of my yellow-rose-Girl
Down the ladder:
For the love of joey(revised)
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Posted: December 15, 2004 3:09 PM PST; Last modified: December 15, 2004 3:09 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.134471 Overall Rank: 5595 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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Blue Magpie @ 212.205.251.61
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15-Dec-04/11:04 PM
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I think it needs a little more work before it can be called truly poetic.
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Dovina @ 69.175.6.101
> Blue Magpie
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16-Dec-04/1:19 PM
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How can something be called truly poetic? Is that different trom or better than poetic? This poem has a good theme with a lot of chunky language.
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RION12 @ 64.136.26.226
> Dovina
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12-Jan-05/5:39 PM
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Thanks for likeing my poem and for sticking up for me. To me I don't care if my poetry is so called "truly poetic" as you say because I like writing poetry and that is all that matters. GOT IT!!!!!!! Thanks again Dovina.
Dude, Eli, who told u that?! I don't remember ME saying that. . .Was it Sergio?! Anyway, LOVELY! MY VERY FIRST FAV!
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