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A friend told me (Free verse) by RION12

"Merry Christmas,Merry Christmas!" That is all I ever hear. I think how can Christmas be so merry if there is so much pain. How can people be so happy? I told my friend what I thought. This is what they told me back: "The world is bad. Your life is bad. Everything is bad. No matter how bad or how hard life is the smallest happy thing makes everything great."

Dovina 16-Dec-04/1:19 PM
How can something be called truly poetic? Is that different trom or better than poetic? This poem has a good theme with a lot of chunky language.




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