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Free verse № 115659

My Wish

by Fire_is_cool

Member since 2004 · Posted 15 Nov 2004 · 4 comments

I wished apon the brightest star, We sit together in the dark, You pull me close, And stare lovingly into my eyes, As you lean in for a kiss, Our lips connect, My knees go weak, My heart goes wild, This is my deepest wish, Only you can make it come true.

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4 comments

[3] Dovina 15-Nov-04/3:09 PM Reply
hogwash!
[2] bamf909 25-Feb-05/10:19 PM Reply
You have out-cliched cliche. Well done. Sorry if that came across as being insensitive.
[1] leonxic 18-Sep-05/12:31 PM Reply
You know, you can't just paste a bunch of cliches together and call it a poem. This should constitute as plagiarism. I'll give you a "1" because you spelled everything right.
[1] Edna Sweetlove 13-Aug-06/5:54 PM Reply
Not very good.