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My Wish (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool I wished apon the brightest star,
We sit together in the dark,
You pull me close,
And stare lovingly into my eyes,
As you lean in for a kiss,
Our lips connect,
My knees go weak,
My heart goes wild,
This is my deepest wish,
Only you can make it come true.
Up the ladder:
Friends
Down the ladder:
just a thought
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Posted: November 15, 2004 8:38 AM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2004 8:38 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.5708694 Overall Rank: 12610 Comments:
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Dovina @ 66.13.145.210
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15-Nov-04/3:09 PM
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hogwash!
You have out-cliched cliche. Well done. Sorry if that came across as being insensitive.
You know, you can't just paste a bunch of cliches together and call it a poem. This should constitute as plagiarism. I'll give you a "1" because you spelled everything right.
Not very good.
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