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madness (Free verse) by mashasha
you are running through the darkness, the blood is coming from your face they follow you, fuck..madness its what they call this kind of place but u keep going, scared, screaming and hope that no one hears you cos otherwise those fucking giants will do the things they always do you r so afraid to close your eyes well, if you do...u can regret it they`ll cut your body and then mice will eat the rest, so dont forget it you wanna stop?..no, never do that cos they are faster than you think like shadows they will cross the forest will come and get you, when u blink you r looking up, but..can see nothing? its not a surprise, they stole the sun you`re getting crazy, why r u laughing? is this for you some kind of fun? i dont think so, cos from your face i see that u r stressed and panic ohh, damn..i think they`ll win the race cos u can hear ,that they are coming the colors changed from green to bloody red you hear whispers in your ear u turn around, damn its messy in your head you wanna cry, is it from fear? but you got tired , i can tell you had too much of this, u r sweating you wanna rest, wait..can u smell? the smell of body, and its bleeding! the head lays far, they`ve cut it off you r trembling inside, but wanna see who is the person, are u sure?..ohh u recognized it,and you scream "It`s me!" then u step back, fall down to the ground u can not concentrate,all is moving in your mind u wanna understand, u wanna just find out was it a fucking dream, illusion from dark side? u open up ur eyes, but all u hear is the silence there is no one, its dark, but quiet in the wood no more of blood, those giant trees or violence what did you say?..u wanna get some food? then go home, get out from the forest u got too crazy, being on your own your brain gets violent when u force it to hear silence all day long unless you love to be in danger and play those games inside your mind when u r becoming fucking stranger to your own body..ohh..u wanna fight but do u think you r gonna win? cos u`ll hit your own face, man the answer`s no..you`ll only sin so better go, enjoying life then!

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8112
Posted: November 16, 2004 1:32 PM PST; Last modified: November 16, 2004 1:32 PM PST
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Comments:
[10] RGSsparky @ 128.243.220.41 | 16-Nov-04/1:48 PM | Reply
very odd, very difernt, very weird, but still, i always give a 10
[n/a] fevriere @ 62.254.128.6 | 16-Nov-04/2:17 PM | Reply
"u" is not a word.
[n/a] mashasha @ 81.153.17.154 > fevriere | 16-Nov-04/4:15 PM | Reply
"u"..cos its faster to write..and im russian..so for me it doesnt make any difference..thanks anyway for it, ill corect myself next time..
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