Funny. The title doesn't help, maybe "Discovery" or "Tubfull" or "Midnight Visitor"

what in god's name is this? Not a Haiku!

A problem we all have to face. Except for me as I intend never to work.

whoa. love square. that sucks.

The best part is "but something at trouser level seemed to make him joyful." -10-

omg that is funny shit -10-

i like it -8- cause it was semi-confusing, but i like the message

Well I have read it a few more times and I still like it. So here a e few comments. There is an 'r' missing of their in "Thie energy for the Spring " this stanza is the one I get least from incidentally. Possibly a hypen between cold and hard in "the cold, hard ground". Maybe a comma after dropped, in "where you dropped boots and all," then just after that commas after home, and soil.

I like it Lydia write what you feel -10-

haha what a shitty poem -9- i'll give you 10-(what its worth)

sometimes you just gotta scrach -8-

such truth. gave you a 9 since the damn jews killed him

thats why god has to be a man, he's just to lazy to care

i think "write" in the 2nd to last stanza should be wrote, but then again mabye i'm just reading it from the wrong angle

i like it! -10-

i find that sometimes it is very counter-productive to think. well for me thats true almost all the time...-9-

How unoriginal. I love it. 10

It's a thing that you do with your face, when both corners of your mouth are upturned and the middle of your mouth is relatively relaxed. Sort of. Maybe.

The rules of Haiku are precise, and this is not Haiku. Please call it Free Verse. It sounds like an opening statement in need of support or illustration, and capitalization of "Him." Often, when I comment on a religious poem, people think I am putting down the religion, but in this case I am not, only the way it's presented.

Reminds me of a poem I wrote in the second grade... It has no imagination once so ever.