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Some Poem (Free verse) by jauser
Just came out of the bathroom took a dump
It was a load, maybe it made a lump
Let put up a sign warning of the smell
How worst it is, go ahead, test it out and then you will be able to tell
Listening to the a song, from Christina Milian â Until I Get Over You
Haha, her name sounds funny, youâre so rich can I get a dollar
Nice voice and everything, but your face makes me not wanna hollar
Uuu big gangster word you said? Well it went well with the rhyme
My rhymes are bad, even worst than the Seuss
Uh oh did I just diss a docter, I think the Grinch should stop using
hair moose
Made the Dr. Seuss part up while taking the shh it
Crit, whit, nit, hit, lit, which one will come next, letâs eliminate
crit, whit, and nit
It doesnât make sense so thereâs now Iâm left with hit and lit
The baseball was fast but wasnât curve
So it got hit and it flew and made it whirled
Maybe I stop here since I think many people will not read on
Pong ong on onta hon mon.
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Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8627
Posted: December 12, 2004 5:22 PM PST; Last modified: December 12, 2004 5:22 PM PST
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