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Some Poem (Free verse) by jauser

Just came out of the bathroom took a dump It was a load, maybe it made a lump Let put up a sign warning of the smell How worst it is, go ahead, test it out and then you will be able to tell Listening to the a song, from Christina Milian – Until I Get Over You Haha, her name sounds funny, you’re so rich can I get a dollar Nice voice and everything, but your face makes me not wanna hollar Uuu big gangster word you said? Well it went well with the rhyme My rhymes are bad, even worst than the Seuss Uh oh did I just diss a docter, I think the Grinch should stop using hair moose Made the Dr. Seuss part up while taking the shh it Crit, whit, nit, hit, lit, which one will come next, let’s eliminate crit, whit, and nit It doesn’t make sense so there’s now I’m left with hit and lit The baseball was fast but wasn’t curve So it got hit and it flew and made it whirled Maybe I stop here since I think many people will not read on Pong ong on onta hon mon.

sir_heff 16-Dec-04/9:02 AM
haha what a shitty poem -9-
i'll give you 10-(what its worth)




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