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Back to Orange and Black

by winniss

Member since 2007 · Posted 15 Oct 2007 · Edited 16 Oct 2007 · 1 comment

Spheres of orange, glowing lights, dance a blaze across a mystical night. Sweeping brooms and pointed tipped hats, fiery emerald eyes of blacken cats. Crystal moon glazing light, bring shadows to the night. Childhood memories tingling down my spine, dripping off a candle and melting into time.

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[8] Skamper 22-Oct-07/10:00 PM Reply
I think tingle instead of tingling would bring this straight into the momment. I like this.