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Back to Orange and Black (Free verse) by winniss

Spheres of orange, glowing lights, dance a blaze across a mystical night. Sweeping brooms and pointed tipped hats, fiery emerald eyes of blacken cats. Crystal moon glazing light, bring shadows to the night. Childhood memories tingling down my spine, dripping off a candle and melting into time.

Skamper 22-Oct-07/10:00 PM
I think tingle instead of tingling would bring this straight into the momment. I like this.




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