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Love-A=? (Free verse) by sir_heff
I’m person A She’s person B The other she’s person C And he’s person D A loves B B loves D And C loves A Are you following me? Then get ready for this ‘cause B wants to be “friends” with A While A doesn’t know about C cause he’s to busy thinking of A And D isn’t allowed to like B because of E A has known B longer than C, but not as long as D And A was the first person B knew out of the group, witch might have something to do With the problem of A+B=”friends” If this still makes sense your insane, more so than A Witch is bad cause he’s fucked up A wonders if he is the only one that sees this equation, Or if he’s crazy for still waiting for B, when C is waiting for me Did C and D come along to show A and B that they where meant for each other Or to make A realize that C is the best he can do, And D is just there to make B happy, since A apparently failed A doesn’t know, he is confused, does B+D=love? If so does that mean that A+C=as good as it gets? Or that love-A=0, cause A has been looking for B more than X years Where X=birth-A*(life) If your still with me then please send me some of whatever your on, It might help A forget about B and settle for C, cause beer ant working A wants to think that D came along to show B how A feels about her And C is there to show A, B’s side of the story But then again A should know this cant be Why does A keep setting himself up for pain, does he like it? Why doesn’t he just walk away, you might ask, I know he does. Then he starts to think about B, and for a split second he is happy Until he realizes that A is not D So it can’t fit in to the afore mentioned equation So he just hopes that the equation is wrong, and that it will be noticed soon There is no logic to explain the way A feels, or the way this “poem” flows A needs to realize the best thing for him isn’t always what he wants Maybe what A doesn’t need is exactly what B flaunts

Up the ladder: Welsh Rain
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.6
Weighted score: 5.3099275
Overall Rank: 3603
Posted: December 16, 2004 2:06 PM PST; Last modified: December 16, 2004 2:06 PM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] New Life Drug @ 69.107.26.171 | 16-Dec-04/5:22 PM | Reply
whoa. love square. that sucks.
[8] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 | 17-Dec-04/6:22 PM | Reply
Your math is crap.
[10] zodiac @ 212.118.11.11 | 17-Dec-04/10:54 PM | Reply
re: "There is no logic to explain the way A feels".

There is. If A is profoundly dim. -10-
[n/a] sir_heff @ 65.13.72.62 > zodiac | 23-Dec-04/11:52 PM | Reply
since A wrote the poem, that should be painfully evident
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 82.39.20.71 | 18-Dec-04/5:44 AM | Reply
Oh dear, another hopelessly bungling "math poeme". We can only pray the meltdown doesn't send the poemeranker server into a Hysteria.
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