interesting.................

i really like this......... -mega

intersing......... -mega

put it under concrete and you've got a *9*

how bout a couple line breaks there? An observation: in places you omit a word, apparently because it isn't needed - and I agree with that philosophy, but in others you pack in little extra ones as if you get paid by the letter (the first three words for starters, the on nearly every line, the first two or three. Clean that crap out and it won't be so pants.

nice.................very simple yet elegant........like (to steal the examples above) a nicely crafted cabinet............lol.............. -mega

um......okay then........................

wow.......blows my mind..........this is so ultimately excellent............10!!!!!! -mega

You've managed to create one of those sayings like twain or wilde and done so in the limits of a haiku so brrrravo its def one of the best on here.

Can you write a rhyme without it being a total nonsequitor? I bet not. The best part was the ham bit.

I'm displeased to find you're back to your old self-righteousness. You were better when you didn't have all the answers. Kind of lovable, even, like a hamster.

PS-I was expecting to read a poem about being rendered genderless, which I've always imagined being able to do on some impermanent basis. Unless by "eat the ham" you mean something below my capacity for contemplation, this is not even close.

Living in a non-English-speaking country, I've become fascinated recently by what constitutes English-speakers' ideas about alien sounds. In short, "zort" is good, but "zortrellon" is an fake Italian soft-porn director. Incidentally, most alien languages on TV sound like Arabic, which (and this is true) was devised in order to communicate with camels. I mean that.

This would have been better if it was "American Smell". What is the American Smell? Bacon and shag carpet.

you know I love this one, but I do agree with dancin n da moonlight's comment....doesn't need to go on quite as long

It's a nice message, and sometimes it's good to hear it. Doesn't mean we need a slew of "I'm okay, you're okay" poems, but the timing for this one was good. Much appreciated.

I'll have to look up the connection between michael moore and bands - brb

this is computer art......not poetry... -mega

I think you misspelled "pppp9ooooi88i77uuu'-'yuy677777777775666 666 666 666 666. -10-

wow........this is so good............. -mega