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What A Little spark Can Do (Pimple) by Blindpoetry You were the girl in my dreams
But nothing more but a spark
But you caught wood and made a fire
And burned down my heart...
Up the ladder:
Light within darkness
Down the ladder:
I would be happy to forget what day it is.
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Posted: January 25, 2004 6:07 PM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2004 6:07 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.2689414 Overall Rank: 3827 Comments:
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clumseYdaiseY @ 219.95.186.251
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26-Jan-04/12:27 AM
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sweet n spontanious
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Goad @ 213.61.217.3
> clumseYdaiseY
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26-Jan-04/10:33 AM
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poetry is crafted language. Now, consider: if you told a cabinetmaker that his cherrywood bookcase looked spontanEous, would that be an insult or a compliment?
nice.................very simple yet elegant........like (to steal the examples above) a nicely crafted cabinet............lol..............
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