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What A Little spark Can Do (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
You were the girl in my dreams But nothing more but a spark But you caught wood and made a fire And burned down my heart...

Up the ladder: Unfair
Down the ladder: Eenie Meenie Minie Moe

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3820
Posted: January 25, 2004 6:07 PM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2004 6:07 PM PST
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[8] clumseYdaiseY @ 219.95.186.251 | 26-Jan-04/12:27 AM | Reply
sweet n spontanious
[n/a] Goad @ 213.61.217.3 > clumseYdaiseY | 26-Jan-04/10:33 AM | Reply
poetry is crafted language. Now, consider: if you told a cabinetmaker that his cherrywood bookcase looked spontanEous, would that be an insult or a compliment?
[9] dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 152.163.100.135 | 16-Jan-05/9:38 PM | Reply
nice.................very simple yet elegant........like (to steal the examples above) a nicely crafted cabinet............lol..............

-mega
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