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A Picture For Danny (Free verse) by Caducus
In a room of daffodils and monotone
Cathy coughs on candles
staring at number eight
making wishes for nine -
unravelling presents
keeping red ribbons
to wear in her hair
next to disco âBarbieâ
both wearing pale bandannas.
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Opposite was Danielâs bed
until the movement of wheels
darkened shiny floors
and he returned
in a desperate mothersâ cry
folded pyjamas
and quiet toy cars.
Cathy used his crayons
drew him with wings,
a green smile and flowing orange hair -
his favourite coloursâ¦
And he shined again on grey walls.
Cathy asked her Daddy
âWhere did Daniel go when he died?'
To which he replied
âYour picture Princessâ
Cathy smiled
as her Dad fought back tears.
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Posted: January 17, 2005 3:08 AM PST; Last modified: January 17, 2005 3:08 AM PST
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