LOL. Fucking hilarious.

a shoe's embrace is kinda funny. and the title is funny too. IN fact, the whole thing is kinda funny.

i cannot believe this poem is currently ranked first, not only is it very cliche, but the rhyming is not very well done

Iron town, is a name for a prison, none in specific, just like the joint, the slammer, the iron town. I wouldn't say anything but... it was kind of the point of the, I've served my time, line.

Must you keep recycling this just to get it on top of the Recent List?

"poorly disguised appeals to pedophilia" Righton. How about those nasty appeals to adultophilia? Nobody cares about the adults any more. toally good. totally.

what sin!

I love to laugh, long and loud and clear It's getting worse every year "Longing that this is not a one time event" I think you do this on purpose, just to see what the critics will say.

i have misplaced my decoder ring.

I'd better velcro my richtometer down in case the girder gives.

Dear Fraser: As the originator of the term "whemying," I congratulate you on a supremely fine piece of work! What rhyme, meter, and a few wonderful words can do..... especially when paired together with such a sweet concept as that of whemying.......... BRAVO TO YOU!!! Doug Soderstrom

The way you re-write cliche is... Cliche.

Woah, best shit ever. I know her, lol

I pray for the day you accidentally get too drunk and face first a twelve inch nigger shaft with your left nostril. you and your stupid fucking bunny, and both your shit writing, GOD.

By the way, this isn't an acrostic, it's a pathetic.

My favourite bit is "Geffen passed around a wooden box full of drugs."

A sense of "doom" here. I like that. Our words mean everything, especially "mine". Paint it black and "red", and add a bunny with a snake body.

Are your breasts floppy?

I enjoyed it, More than I you know. There are ways I would like to explain what I think of it to u, but I doubt they would do justice. So I'll leave it at this; beyond mere idea.

That was insane.