9.999 the word (word) at the start of s-2 really pisses me off. Word?

My first instinct was -ace. then I went and read the other comments. stupid me. I agree with <~>. I disagree with Mona Lisa and Shuush.

Pretty neat -7- Lindz14

It's your thang -7- Lindz14

Hardcore -8- Lindz14

This is a pretty chillin poem man..... "Gunshot wounds to the heart tend, To rain less than they pour, A reality not occured well in, The land of unhinged doors," That's pretty intense -9- Lindz14

Why am I paying you to give me the willies?

i think its good u have to try hard to forget me........o and thanx for the lesson

I'm not trying to sound like an elitist because it isn't bad, it just doesn't sound unlike anything I've heard before, if you get what I'm saying

Wow...This is great -10- Lindz14

It reminds me of the seasonal-depression I expierience. The winter is horrible. The summer is awesome. You're poem is alright.

Let it ride, cupcake.

And then add a "dispose of after" date and we'd have a cure for overpopulation. Um, I don't know, Dan. I smell a tit of sarcasm but I can't bring myself to liking it.

Very poignant.

Fantastic. A privilege to read. -10- and favourite.

Last few lines don't seem to fit as well as the rest, particularly the penultimate. Seems to me like "She'd do anything" would work better, but it's your poem. And I still give you a -9-

How odd. -8-

Ooh. Philosophical poetry. I like. -8-

The world is filled with assholes and idiots, don't let them bring you down. I'm glad it seems as though you've come to that conclusion yourself, rock on.

It flows beatifully except for the last line. Needs one more beat I think. "and she knew he understood(Dadum)." PS. beatifully was a pun.