| Re: Words by Dovina |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
17-Aug-05/4:04 PM |
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9.999 the word (word) at the start of s-2 really pisses me off. Word?
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| Re: The cat who would fly by nentwined |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
17-Aug-05/4:11 PM |
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My first instinct was -ace. then I went and read the other comments. stupid me. I agree with <~>. I disagree with Mona Lisa and Shuush.
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| Re: I hate you too U2 by D. $ Fontera |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
17-Aug-05/4:13 PM |
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Why am I paying you to give me the willies?
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| Re: a killer world by AM I EVIL? |
AM I EVIL? 24.70.95.203 |
17-Aug-05/4:29 PM |
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i think its good u have to try hard to forget me........o and thanx for the lesson
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| Re: Doesn't Hurt Me by Miggy |
i_am_the_popsicle 205.188.116.139 |
17-Aug-05/4:35 PM |
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I'm not trying to sound like an elitist because it isn't bad, it just doesn't sound unlike anything I've heard before,
if you get what I'm saying
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| Re: My Mornings were Filled with Nightmares and Pies by T. Jonathron Remp |
Lindz14 65.93.139.23 |
17-Aug-05/4:39 PM |
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Wow...This is great -10-
Lindz14
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Lindz14 65.93.139.23 |
17-Aug-05/4:42 PM |
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| Re: Little Orange Petal Flower by i_am_the_popsicle |
drnick 24.176.15.223 |
18-Aug-05/1:55 AM |
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It reminds me of the seasonal-depression I expierience. The winter is horrible. The summer is awesome. You're poem is alright.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
18-Aug-05/6:14 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
18-Aug-05/6:35 AM |
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And then add a "dispose of after" date and we'd have a cure for overpopulation. Um, I don't know, Dan. I smell a tit of sarcasm but I can't bring myself to liking it.
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| Re: Yellow Leather Innards by PsydewaysTears |
Bobjim 143.167.132.21 |
18-Aug-05/6:53 AM |
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| Re: The Story of Our Lives by woodstock20000 |
Bobjim 143.167.132.21 |
18-Aug-05/6:55 AM |
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Ooh. Philosophical poetry. I like. -8-
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| Re: The Stone Man by Bethy |
Bobjim 143.167.132.21 |
18-Aug-05/7:04 AM |
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| Re: Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy |
Bobjim 143.167.132.21 |
18-Aug-05/7:06 AM |
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Fantastic. A privilege to read. -10- and favourite.
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| Re: Home by Bethy |
Bobjim 143.167.132.21 |
18-Aug-05/7:12 AM |
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Last few lines don't seem to fit as well as the rest, particularly the penultimate. Seems to me like "She'd do anything" would work better, but it's your poem.
And I still give you a -9-
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| Re: Transfer by Miggy |
Lindz14 65.93.139.23 |
18-Aug-05/8:11 AM |
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It's your thang -7-
Lindz14
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| Re: Outsider by Miggy |
Lindz14 65.93.139.23 |
18-Aug-05/8:13 AM |
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| Re: The Giant Verse by drnick |
Lindz14 65.93.139.23 |
18-Aug-05/8:15 AM |
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This is a pretty chillin poem man.....
"Gunshot wounds to the heart tend,
To rain less than they pour,
A reality not occured well in,
The land of unhinged doors,"
That's pretty intense -9-
Lindz14
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| Re: Fading.+/ by Lindz14 |
drnick 24.176.15.223 |
18-Aug-05/9:58 AM |
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The world is filled with assholes and idiots, don't let them bring you down. I'm glad it seems as though you've come to that conclusion yourself, rock on.
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| Re: How Angels Sleep by Dovina |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
18-Aug-05/10:05 AM |
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It flows beatifully except for the last line. Needs one more beat I think. "and she knew he understood(Dadum)."
PS. beatifully was a pun.
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