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Outsider (Lyric) by Miggy
These two open doors seem too familiar But I never been inside this place before People pass me by without a word to say Another chance to feel again all alone Walking inside a set of dull four walls Everyone stares at me wishing to get out The big man hellos me without a second thought And I’m wondering what this dream’s about (Chorus) Want to run away but I’m locked in this cell I was placed in here without committing sin Desperate to belong but only answered by a bell Looking like an outsider just trying to fit in As I carry all my books to a narrow private spot Two guys shoved me in what is also a hallow trap In this pitch black hole a smell that wasn’t right So I tried to get out only getting my knee snapped Where the food is brought I sit with no one else Chatter about me goes on in a nearby crowd Before I look behind today’s desert is on my back And I’m wondering what this dream’s about (Chorus) (Bridge) I can’t understand why this all take place To confront this mandatory hell face to face Need to bear with all of it for four more years Making sure that this school doesn’t see my tears (Chorus/Ending)

Up the ladder: 86'd

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.571429
Weighted score: 6.8798647
Overall Rank: 261
Posted: February 16, 2004 11:28 AM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2004 11:28 AM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 17-Feb-04/2:55 PM | Reply
Jesus may I someday sing like this.
[8] Lindz14 @ 65.93.139.23 | 18-Aug-05/8:13 AM | Reply
Hardcore -8-
Lindz14
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