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Loss (Ghazal) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
Something happened to me, but I forgot what it was
Regardless of regard, love, warmth, vitamins and milk.
Cigarettes and long walks through fleeting concentration
I have an idea that what I thought mattered changed.
I was brought up, and let go, I was taken there lacking
And when bathing quit, sleep folded, and answers caved.
People began to need more of what identifies them
From their clothes, kisses, small talk, and sincerity.
But the day I was born Nixon lied and Elvis died
And all of the things I wrote my name upon vanished.
There are pictures and sweet notes still kept loosely
Among crenellated landscapes I recall out of habit.
If I keep separating and dividing these variables
Perhaps I will formulate an old way to feel new.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.571429
Weighted score: 6.8798647
Overall Rank: 264
Posted: May 1, 2004 10:46 PM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2004 10:46 PM PDT
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