The first seven lines are good. After that, you add something to the requirements for faith faith, something unnecessary in my opinion - faith in certain people. I don't see how "the core of my faith would be eroded" if I fail to take someone's word for something. Doesn't the Bible tell us to judge these things?

This is a bad apostrophe

Oh dear. All in all, I think I wouldn't notice you were gone and I'm trying my hardest to forget. Also, giraffe has an 'e' and in the penultimate line it should be you're not your.

Jeepers...I like this poem...very flowing...yet the subject is a little on the interesting side...:) Bethy

Nice...yet sad...:) Bethy

cause and affect...:) Bethy

Verry Good....:) Bethy

With the changing seasons, your spirit dies then is reborn...its sad, but then if we could all be little orange flowers...we could refresh ourselves seasonally and be new again...sounds good eh...lol :) :) Bethy

hehehe...I made a mistake once...but I was wrong...lol cool poem :) Bethy

Yes, God did enter my mind...but I was kinda thinking about my Dad...:) Bethy

good poem...how about this for a last line... In the life hereafter...;) I really like this...its a fav!!! Bethy

This is great -8- Lindz14

I'm feeling it keep up the good work -9- Lindz14

Good Job -8- Lindz14

Pretty hardcore -7- Lindz14

please drop the full stop at the end of s-2. some stanzas have a submissive beat others don't. why? I got interchangeability between man/god/angels. For some reason that works for me.

great title! I think nuclear when you say -melt. I smell something to do with Muslim extremists .

I suggest, kill s-3 and s-4, save the penultimate and attach it to the bottom of s-2. Leave the end.

I don't know what to say about this other than it looks like more raw material than anything else. However, it is good stock, like Hickory. I would like to see the rewrite.

HA! Loved it.