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Angel (Free verse) by Butterfly1120
She to me is an angel. One sent from up above. Here to give, and not recieve, someone with so much love. The one I can rely on, until the very end. No matter what happens in life, shes always there to be a friend. Picking up the pieces, of my broken heart. Being there to comfort, when my world just falls apart. I wouldn't change a thing, there could never be another. God sent me an angel, I just call her Mother.

Up the ladder: Left
Down the ladder: when i make sculpture

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3
Weighted score: 5.65
Overall Rank: 2126
Posted: October 29, 2003 4:37 PM PST; Last modified: October 29, 2003 4:37 PM PST
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[10] The Slender Blade @ 163.1.234.221 | 29-Oct-03/5:26 PM | Reply
This is truly beautiful.
[10] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.234.221 | 29-Oct-03/5:41 PM | Reply
I think you really have a gift. I am glad you have shared it with us. -10-
[4] kingit @ 67.69.60.238 | 29-Oct-03/6:18 PM | Reply
incestuous lesbianism...every guy applauds this!
[5] Wobble McFly @ 195.157.153.253 | 30-Oct-03/1:27 AM | Reply
Change the last line to this:

"God sent me an angel, I just call her Motherfucker"

Such an amendment would serve to lend the poem one more layer of polytextual poignality.
[8] Lindz14 @ 65.93.139.23 | 17-Aug-05/1:29 PM | Reply
This is great -8-

Lindz14
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