Angel

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Oct 2003 · 5 comments

She to me is an angel. One sent from up above. Here to give, and not recieve, someone with so much love. The one I can rely on, until the very end. No matter what happens in life, shes always there to be a friend. Picking up the pieces, of my broken heart. Being there to comfort, when my world just falls apart. I wouldn't change a thing, there could never be another. God sent me an angel, I just call her Mother.

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5 comments

[10] The Slender Blade 29-Oct-03/5:26 PM Reply

This is truly beautiful.

[10] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 29-Oct-03/5:41 PM Reply

I think you really have a gift. I am glad you have shared it with us. -10-

[4] kingit 29-Oct-03/6:18 PM Reply

incestuous lesbianism...every guy applauds this!

[5] Wobble McFly 30-Oct-03/1:27 AM Reply

Change the last line to this:

"God sent me an angel, I just call her Motherfucker"

Such an amendment would serve to lend the poem one more layer of polytextual poignality.

[8] Lindz14 17-Aug-05/1:29 PM Reply

This is great -8-

Lindz14