Dull

Moses?

I don't see why that makes it "a good thing."

Will the box of inane and senseless missives I left on your doorstep return to me marked “Shipment Refused,” but contain, in reality, repentant flowers and gestures of reconcillation? No answer needed. I can already hear the beginnings of “Loser, loser, loser.”

I really love this Dovina...its beautiful...:) Bethy

I like the rhythm and the theme. "with the heartbreak" could lose the "the" I think. And I see no deed for the "..." The last line seems unsupported as a statement without reason.

Please, fix the misspellings. You don't have anything exciting or artful here, just a dull meditation on the afterlife. I have been forced to read many, many poems like this and smile indulgently at their authors and say "it's nice." Online, however, I have no compunction about telling you that this poem is worthless. I mean that as no offense, I'm just telling you what I think.

Now this is just plain fecal

You had me with the first verse - really descriptive. But as it relates to arogance and Narcissusism and the rest, well, I don't see it relating.

At lesst fix the spelling, grammar and tense problems.

Pretty good rhythm. Fix the spelling! But mostly try to say it in a less trite way.

fukin loved it very detaild

sounds to me like u have been betrayed from what ive read in ur poems

i like the poem itself....but i dont understand the ending

i like this one....very truthful

who hasnt asked god what are they here for

Nice poem. Not my view on angels, but I won't let that detract from it. -8-

God help me if Dark Angel sees this.

I'm having trouble with the pronoun "it." Used three times, "it" surely carries something in tow, but what? The fact that "it knows" complicates the issue. I'll hold off voting for now.

I think this could be said in fewer words, and in more words spelled right. You've got the makings of a poem here, but before posting, please look for repetition and loose ends.