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untitled (Free verse) by nicole081083 When you don't know where to turn
And you have to make a choice
It's then you need to learn
To listen to that still small voice
He lives within your heart
Just waiting for you to hear Him
Don't you think it's time we start
To take the time to listn
Up the ladder:
Let Go
Down the ladder:
Forever Moving On
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Posted: August 15, 2005 10:30 AM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2005 10:30 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10583 Comments:
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Bethy @ 24.222.32.196
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15-Aug-05/12:55 PM
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good job Nicole...:) Bethy
Dull
Pretty good rhythm. Fix the spelling! But mostly try to say it in a less trite way.
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