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The Box (Other) by PsydewaysTears
Talons that take
And then come back for more,
Slicing up sections
And counting the score.
My body's a dartboard
For daggers and knives.
The sun is a countdown
Until death arrives.
Once knocks the box.
Clutches of dragons
Sharp, cutthroat and cold,
Enduring a lifetime
To fold and behold.
A mindless conclusion
Soft, simple and still;
Alone in the dark
With no dreams to fulfill.
Twice knocks the box.
Fingers of mothers
And backhands of dads
Scraping through flesh
Of their lackluster lads.
Weave me a basket
Blow me a balloon
Kiss me away
And whisper the word "soon".
Thrice knocks the box.
With the clouds as my witness
And the birds at my side
I'll glance back behind me
At the tears that I've cried,
And I'll see you there knelt
By the bald riverside
By the box floating softly
With a child inside.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9459
Posted: August 14, 2005 10:20 AM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2005 10:20 AM PDT
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