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why there are no virgins (Free verse) by daggatolar
so the say they don't know we are not virgins who held the guns raining bullets into our hostess and bled us off from realmen soldiers with guns do they now stop the village from sleep in search of a virgin our breast are no longer erect but were not sucked they were SAPped SAPped out of existence for want of bloodfree hands to nourish and keep them tender

Up the ladder: The wait
Down the ladder: Consumed

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9437
Posted: September 24, 2004 5:38 AM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2004 5:38 AM PDT
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[7] Sasha @ 69.138.240.116 | 25-Sep-04/10:49 AM | Reply
-7- For shock
[6] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 | 26-Sep-04/4:27 PM | Reply
Wet cocaINE
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